IELTS 5 TEST 2, WRITING TASK 2 In some countries young perple are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and dis

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IELTS 5 TEST 2, WRITING TASK 2 In some countries young perple are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages fou young people who decide to do this. Gap year trip has become popular amoung the young people resently. They take one year to travel aroud and some of them work all the way to pay the expences between finishing high school and starting unitiversity studies. There is no doubt that teenagers benefit from travelling, and travelling edifies them to some extent. Since what they will meet during the trip is unpredictable, they will have to be well prepared and learn how to use their knowledge to solve problems. Furthermore, different views and cultures will widely open their mind and upgrade their outlooks to a higher level, make them better persons. To addition, they will learn how to make a living to support themselves while they are travelling, which is useful for them when they start to work offically. Those are the advantages of the gap year trip. As we all known that a coin has two sides, the gap year trip do has some disadvantages. Firstly, the safety problem, which is a huge problem to not only the teenagers themselves but also teenagers' families. Accidents are ever never under controlled, so they may get injured in a car accident or something like that. What's more, it is because the world is so complicated that sometimes they might be tempted with drugs and weeds by bad people and become addicts. Moreover, crimes like robbery and theft can do harm to them. They may loss their money and properties that they could not continue the journey or even could not go back home sometimes. Those bad influences of the trip are terrifying teenagers. However, I think young peole should travel around to see the world regardless of thoes disadvantages because the advantages are much more helpful to their future studies as well as life. All they need to do is being completely prepared physically and mentally, so that they could have a wonderful meaningful gap year trip.

15 maj 2014 04:32

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IELTS 5 TEST 2, WRITING TASK 2

In some countries young perple are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages fou young people who decide to do this.

Gap year trip has become popular amoung the young people resently. They take one year to travel aroud and some of them work all the way to pay the expences between finishing high school and starting unitiversity studies.

There is no doubt that teenagers benefit from travelling, and travelling edifies them to some extent. Since what they will meet during the trip is unpredictable, they will have to be well prepared and learn how to use their knowledge to solve problems. Furthermore, different views and cultures will widely open their mind and upgrade their outlooks to a higher level, make them better persons. To addition, they will learn how to make a living to support themselves while they are travelling, which is useful for them when they start to work offically. Those are the advantages of the gap year trip.

As we all known that a coin has two sides, the gap year trip do has some disadvantages. Firstly, the safety problem, which is a huge problem to not only the teenagers themselves but also teenagers' families. Accidents are ever never under controlled, so they may get injured in a car accident or something like that. What's more, it is because the world is so complicated that sometimes they might be tempted with drugs and weeds by bad people and become addicts. Moreover, crimes like robbery and theft can do harm to them. They may loss their money and properties that they could not continue the journey or even could not go back home sometimes. Those bad influences of the trip are terrifying teenagers.

However, I think young peole should travel around to see the world regardless of thoes disadvantages because the advantages are much more helpful to their future studies as well as life. All they need to do is being completely prepared physically and mentally, so that they could have a wonderful meaningful gap year trip.

15 maja 2014

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