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My only love My mom is very unique person in my life. can't imagine my life without her. she loves me unconditionally , listens to me, prepare my food and help me in my homework. she always encourages me to be myself and become better each day .she makes me smile when i become sad and scream at me when i become lazy think i am the luckiest person in this planet because I had her in my life.

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My only love

My mom is very unique person in my life. I can't imagine my life without her. She loves me unconditionally , listens to me, prepares my food and helps me in with  my homework. She always encourages me to be myself and become better each day. She makes me smile when I become sad and screams at me when I become lazy think.  I am the luckiest person in this planet because I have her in my life.

 

Notes: unique cannot be qualified as it is absolute. I know that you often see it qualified (as you have done) but you should not do that. 

 

Watch your capitals for

. the first letter of a word in a new sentence.

. for yourself I talk to myself ---- not --- i talk to myself.

. you are having some difficulty with past and present tense

 had is past tense which is not appropriate for your wonderful mother.

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My only love

My mom is a very unique person in my life. I can't imagine my life without her. She loves me unconditionally , listens to me, prepares my food and helps me with my homework. She always encourages me to be myself and become better each day. She makes me smile when I become sad and screams at me when I become lazy. I think I am the luckiest person on this planet because I have her in my life.

 

اهههه هي انتي!

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