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Karen
My mon My mon is my love, she always give me the best and support all my decisions, inclusive when i haved mistakes , she always have the correct words for me. She is very beauty for me, we always make jokes and sometimes we go out for dinner together our favorite dish "tacacho con cecina" is a dish from peruvian jungle :). She always fight for be a great mon for us. She knows all my secrets , when i like some guy , she give me the best advices haha n.n , I Of course sometimes we fight because is natural i think, but like a good friends we always speak again about that and continue doing good our relationship mother and daughter . We passed for bad times when I was sick, but now we are happy family with my dad and brother. I hope someday when i have my own family i can give my kids a family like my mon give me n_n I look like my father but somepeople tell me i have the smile of my mon haha n_n
16 cze 2014 17:06
Poprawki · 4
si lo se Julieta en realidad me falta mucha gramática jaja y reglas , lo que pasa es he aprendido ingles de manera muy autodidacta, pero tratare de mejorar , gracias por la corrección.
17 czerwca 2014

     My <em>mom</em> is my love. She always gives me <em>her</em> best, and supports all <em>of </em>my decisions.  <em>Even </em>when <em>I</em> <em>make</em> mistakes, she always <em>shows me how to correct them</em>. She is very beautiful <em>to </em>me, <em>because</em> we <em>are </em>always <em>joking-around</em>.  <em>When we</em> go out <em>to</em> dinner together, our favorite dish <em>to have is called</em> "Tacacho con Cecina," a dish from <em>the </em>Peruvian Jungle. She always <em>fought</em> <em>to</em> be a great mom for us. She knows all my secrets, <em>for example; </em>when I like some guy <em>she will</em> give me the best advice. <em>Naturally,</em> sometimes we fight, but <em>just </em>like good friends, we always <em>resolve our differences</em> and continue our mother/daughter relationship. We <em>had</em> <em>difficulties</em> when I was sick, but now we are <em></em>happy family, <em>together </em>with my dad and brother. I hope <em>that </em>someday, when I have my own family, I <em>am able to</em> give my kids a family like my <em>mom gave</em> me. I <em>resemble</em> my father's side of the family, but some people tell me <em>that </em>I have <em>my mom's smile.</em>

17 czerwca 2014

My mon Mom

My mon mom is my love. She always gives me the best and supports all my decisions, inclusive including when I haved make mistakes. She always have has the correct right words for me. She is very beauty for beautiful to me. We always make jokes and sometimes we go out for dinner together. Our favorite dish, "tacacho con cecina," is a dish from the Peruvian jungle :). She always fights for to be a great mon mom for us. She knows all my secrets. When I like some a guy, she gives me the best advices advice, haha n.n Of course sometimes we fight, because it is natural, I think. But like a good friends we always speak again about that talk about it and continue doing good our good mother-daughter relationship mother and daughter .
We passed for went through bad times when I was sick, but now we are a happy family with my dad and brother. I hope someday, when I have my own family, I can give my kids a family like my mon mom give gives me n_n
I look like my father but some people tell me I have the smile of my mon my mom's smile haha n_n

 

Beautiful!

16 czerwca 2014
recuerda que es En inglés Estadounidense: Mamá es mother o mom, y pone comas que es muy importante, porque alguien que lo lee de corrido hay muchas cosas que no tienen sentido, pero si les pones comas si. saludos
16 czerwca 2014
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