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Summer is coming This afternoon I took the dog for a walk and we went to the beach. The weather was fantastic, sunny and quite hot. There were a lot of people sunbathing or swimming and walking too. I have been playing football with many children who were on the beach. I'm too older for these hard works! After four hours I backed home, I had a shower and I drunk a fruit juice while I watched "Criminal minds" on the TV. It's great this sort of life, I love summer!

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Summer is coming

 

This afternoon I took the dog for a walk and we went to at the beach. The weather was fantastic, sunny and quite hot. There were a lot of people many sunbathers or swimmers and walking strollers too.  I also played have been playing football with many children who were there. on the beach. I tired out easily with them.  Perhaps, I'm too older for them [or "Perhaps I'm being too old for such activities!"] these hard works!
After four hours,  I came/went/returned  backed home. I Had a shower and I drank a some fruit juice while I watched watching "Criminal minds" on the TV.

 

It's great in this sort of life. I love summer!

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Summer is coming

This afternoon I took the dog for a walk and we went to the beach. The weather was fantastic, sunny and quite hot. There were a lot of people sunbathing or swimming and walking too.
I have been playing football with many children who were on the beach. I'm too old for such hard work!
After four hours I went back home, I had a shower and I drunk a fruit juice while I watched "Criminal minds" on the TV.
It's great this sort of life, I love summer!

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