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To protect animals should we close all the zoos?
With the increasing number of educational opportunities, more and more people are realizing that we should respect the freedom of animals. Sometimes in the news we are being shown animals locked up in the cages, those creatures lost their freedom and now do not have enough space to be active. Although some people thinks it’s very cruel, but in my opinion , I do not think all the zoos should be closed.
The zoos can provide more opportunities chances to educate children about how to animal protection, and about how to coexist live with other life biology on the earth. Thus They will learn to not be cruel to animals do some cruel things to hurt animals. Some of them by through visiting the zoos while may even acquire have a dream of becoming to be a biologist in the future. It (what does "It" mean?) has advantages for protecting animals, especially the rare ones protecting rare animals.
The number of rare animals is decreasing less in the world. If we close all the zoos, maybe most of them ("them" is animals or zoos?) will become extinct dead under the guns by people who want to earn money from them because of excessive poaching. Our children won’t be able to see them in the wild real world, and only will only read in learn about them from the books. The world will become biologically unbalanced in biological area.
Maybe, it’s not equal fair for some animals who live in the cages. They looks like very unfree they lack freedom. And it’s cruel for them. Some of them die dead because the living space is life space too small, or the air is not clean enough. But I still do not agree with some people persons who want to close all the zoos. Nowadays, more and more wildzoos wildlife sanctuaries were build are being built, the animals have bigger space to live , some of them live like humans – they have a bedroom, a bathroom, etc. So I think with the economic development, the governments will start getting more tax money that they can use to change the living environment of animals.
To sum up, I think we can find a different way to give animals a better life, a way that is not only limited in by closing the zoos idea.
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