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IEST6 TEST3 WRITING TASK2
Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is an arguement between visitors following local customs and behaviour and the host country welcoming cultural differences.
Some people believe that it is important for visitors to follow local customs and behaviour because that plays a vital role in broading their horison and receiving unique experiences. Some foreign customs and behaviour differ from the domestic ones, for example, Indian only use right hand to grap food and you have to take off your shoes before you enter a Japanese's home. These impressive and different customs and behaviour can expand out outlook and present an unforgetable experience.
However, others think that the host country should welcome cultural differences bringing from tourists to boost local economy. Travelling abroad has become popular in recent years and people are willing to spend more money on travelling than usual. Countries welcome cultural differences and adjust the tourists' habits to attract more tourists, which provides oppotunities for local government to help increase local economy and rise living standard for local people.
In my opinion, visitors should follow local customs and behaviour as it is the best way to experience the life differing from their familiar one and show their respect to the country they are travelling in.
5 lip 2014 07:11
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The task seems to have been answered. Ideas are not difficult to follow. Vocabulary size is sufficient for this task. But the major problem seems to be your grammar. Some sentences are confusing, and requires re-reading to understand.
5 lipca 2014
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chiński (mandaryński), angielski
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