They want to see a hero. I can see wishes in the eyes of the people around me, no matter my parent , my lover or my relatives. I can tell they want me to be a hero, they want to see the happening of s

喜乐的小扁

They want to see a hero. I can see wishes in the eyes of the people around me, no matter my parent , my lover or my relatives. I can tell they want me to be a hero, they want to see the happening of something really cool. "Then be a hero" I often say to my heart, and I believe I can make things different. Yeah !

24 lip 2014 15:38

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They want to see a hero.

I can see the wishes in the eyes of the people around me - no matter my parents, my lover or my relatives. I can tell they want me to be a hero, they want to see the happening of something really cool happen. "Then be a hero," I often say to my heart, and I believe I can make things different. Yeah!

Very good, Superman! Remember, space after most punctuation marks in English, not before.

24 lipca 2014

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