Javi
A unexpected event I went to buy a remote control for garage this afternoon. Two English girls asked me where was a ciber cafe, but I didn´t Known explain it beucause I didn´t had the trust required. For event as this I want learn´t English. That language is every time more necessary. Thank you very much. King regards Javier
30 lip 2014 19:27
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A unexpected event

I went to buy a remote control for the garage this afternoon. Two English girls asked me where there was a ciber cafe, but I didn´t Known know how to explain it beucause because I didn´t had have the trust required  confidence I needed. For events such as this, I want to learn learn´t English. That language is becoming every time more and more (increasingly) necessary.

Thank you very much.

King regards, 

Javier

1 sierpnia 2014
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I went to buy a remote control for [my] garage this afternoon.
Two English girls asked me where a ciber café [was], but I didn´t [k]now [how to] explain it because I didn´t ha[ve] the [vocabulary] (?) required.
[I want to learn English for situations like that].
[Knolwedge of the English] language is [increasingly] necessary.

Thank you very much.

Kin[d] regards[,]

 

Here is what I removed from yours:
I went to buy a remote control for garage this afternoon.
Two English girls asked me where< was> a ciber cafe, but I didn´t <K>now<n> explain it be<u>cause I didn´t ha<d> the <trust> required.
<For event as this I want learn´t English.>
<That> language is <every time more> necessary.

Thank you very much.

Kin<g> regards

30 lipca 2014
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Hola Javier,

 

I agree English is becoming more and more essential in daily life; and not just in business any more. Here are a few corrections to help you improve your writing.

 

A unexpected event

I went to buy a remote control for the/my garage this afternoon. Two English girls asked me where there was a ciber cafe, but I didn't Known how to explain it beucause I didn't had the trust required my English. For events such as this I want to learn´t English. This language is every time more and more necessary.

Thank you very much.

King regards

Javier

30 lipca 2014

A unexpected event

I went to buy a remote control for the garage this afternoon. Two English girls asked me where they could find a cyber cafe, but I didn´t know how to explain it because I didn´t have the confidence required. For events such as this I want to learn English. That language is more and more necessary.

Thank you very much.

King regards

Javier

30 lipca 2014
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