Ha ha Today I went to cut hair, I feel good. To my friends say don't look good. May be I get fat, my friend said I look fatter than before more than 10 jins, I think I may need to exercise. Not a day

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Ha ha Today I went to cut hair, I feel good. To my friends say don't look good. May be I get fat, my friend said I look fatter than before more than 10 jins, I think I may need to exercise. Not a day to stay at home to play games. Wish me luck, I hope I can control my weight.

31 lip 2014 14:53

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Ha ha

Today I went to get a hair cut, I feel good. Though my friends say I don't look good. Maybe I have gotten fat; my friend said I look fatter than before by more than 10 jins. I think I may need to exercise. No more days staying at home to play games. Wish me luck, I hope I can control my weight.

I don't know what 'jins' means. I guess it's a measurement of weight. I rephrased some things to make them more natural.

31 lipca 2014

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