My little town

My town is a little and nice village. It is on the hills and it is sorrounded by the nature. In the center there is the main place and near it there is a parking area nearby.My house is outside of the center. When come the winter comes the panorama is more beautiful, with the snowy hills and the snowmen.

My town is a little and nice: town and village are different things. However, you still can say something like "my town is a village" as a joke.

When come the winter comes: I come, you come, it comes... You will get used to it :)

Snowmen: The plural form of 'man' is 'men', and it is similar with the words that end with -man (sportsman, snowman etc).

To tell the truth, I changed "near it" for "nearby" because I felt like it :) It's better to ask a native speaker though...

My little town

My town is a nice little place, closer in size to a village. (note 1)

It is in an upland/hilly/mountainous area and it is surrounded by the nature.

The main square is in the town centre, and nearby there is a parking area (note 2). My house is outside of the center/on the periphery/on the town outskirts.

When the winter comes / In winter the panorama is more beautiful, with the snowy hills and the snowmen.

Note 1: Si abita o in una cittadina di campagna o in un villaggio. Sono cose diverse. Suppongo che abbia inteso dire che la tua città è piccolissima, simile a un villaggio. 

Note 2: A parking area = un'area di parcheggio. Se, invece di un parcheggio, intendevi dire un giardinetto pubblico, dovresti dire così: 'and near it there is a park/a grassy common.'

My Little Town

My town is a little and nice village. It is on the hills and it is sorrounded by the nature. The main place is in the center and there is a park near by.  In the center there is the main place and near it there is a parking area. My house is outside of the center. When the winter comes come the winter the panorama is more beautiful, with the snowy hills and the snowmans.