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The most place more incredible place where I have been to.
Three weeks ago, I was visited visiting the to cliffs of Moher.
These cliffs are located in Ireland and are the biggest most big from in Europe. I've had been in other cliffs from Canary Islands before, but I think that cliffs of Moher are more awesome than cliffs of from Canary Islands.
When I saw this place, I was remained fascinated!. It was better than in the pictures.
My friends and I walked began to walking about them and only stopped when we got to the arrive until penultimate cliff.
Since From above everything seemed all was seen very small, even the boats! Some people even chose to take a boat to for see the cliffs.
We were careful, when we were neared the shore because the guide told said us that many much people had died there.
There was also a castle where you could see the landscape better the landscape, but we wouldn't should to pay three euros to for climb there. We thought that it was a scam, and we decided not enter. In Ireland everything all is very expensive!
Then, we went to see a café in the mountain, it was very original! I hadn't seen a café localed inside a mountain before.
When, I came back to Dublin, I bought back postcards of the cliffs of Moher and now I can see this wonderful place every day in since my room.
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