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Money cannot buy happiness?
I wanted to agree with the title above. Because there should be some who are happy just having friendship, their family, boyfriend, girlfriend, or doing something like sports, reading, watching TV, drawing or talking.
You know why I said "I wanted to agree"?
Coming here, how much money did I have to pay throughout my life.
In my teens, I loved playing TV games. But in doing so, how many (soft wears and hard wears) *are not used in English* my parents got for me..
Suggest -> But in doing so, my parents bought me a lot of software and hardware.
And I stopped using them after I graduated from junior high school. You know what happened next? I got interested in fashion. Plus I practiced track and field. I had to buy so much stuff for them, and fashioned clothes and shoes all with pocket money I earned from my parents.
Now, all I want are new digital cameras, watches, and running shoes. (keep the subjects all pural or put an "a" in front of noun - for example - Now, all I want are new digital cameras, a watch and running shoes.)
I do not know if the time will ever come that I be happy without money..
Good luck!
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