The first time that my daughter has gone to cinema

[Today] was the first time that my daughter went to the cinema.

Today is a beautiful day.

My wife and I are very happy because our daughter has gone to the cinema.
My wife and I were very happy because our daughter went to the cinema.
We were worried for if she was afraid because she is two years and six month only.
We were worried if she was afraid because she is only two years and six months old.
Finally, she was very, very happy.
Luckily, she was very, very happy.
We think that we will come back the next saturday or sunday.

My wife and I think we will go again next Saturday or Sunday.

Overall, good writing skills. You are able to express your ideas clearly. Please be careful with your verb tenses, you often switch between the present tense and the past tense. REMEMBER, if a sentence begins in one tense, then it should stay in that tense.