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Hi! On Sunday, I went to a hotel with my old friends to drink somethings have a drinkat the terrace of the hotel. When we went got there, we waited our for another friend. When she came, we went to terrace. It was very cold! But the viev view was great. All the city The whole city was under our feet and we could see all of the city. We ordered espressos, and started to speak. Old talk about old school memories, our craziness, and old friends. We talked and laughed a lot laughed. The day passed was great because I saw my old friends. When I leave from they left them, it was sad.

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