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Talking about myself Hi everyone, My name is Miriam. I'm a 20 year old women from Syria and originally from France. I'm in my third year of the 5-year B.Eng. degree programme studying Electronics & Telecommunications Engineering at Damascus University. Due to everything that is going on in my country, I've decided to complete this academic year and then start applying to universities abroad. Somebody might says that I'm unpatriotic and that home is not a hotel you leave when service gets bad but I don't think I can do something by staying here. I was thinking to complete my education in the US if I could get a scholarship but with how hard that can be, I may go to somewhere where Education is for free or not too expensive. Somewhere like Germany for example.

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Talking about myself

Hi everyone,
My name is Miriam. I'm a 20 year old women from Syria and originally from France.

I'm in my third year of the 5-year B.Eng. degree programme studying Electronics & Telecommunications Engineering at Damascus University.

Due to everything that is going on in my country, I've decided to complete this academic year and then start applying to universities abroad. Somebody might says that I'm unpatriotic and that home is not a hotel you leave when service gets bad but I don't think I can do something by staying here.

I was thinking to complete my education in the US if I could get a scholarship but with how hard that can be, I may go to somewhere where Education is for free or not too expensive. Somewhere like Germany for example.

 

'20 year old women from Syria and originally from France' :  20 year old woman from Syria, and . .

'Somebody might says . . ' :   Some people might say . .

'when service gets bad but I don't think I can do something by staying here.' :     when service gets bad, but I don't think I can do[achieve] anything by staying here.

'I was thinking to complete my education in the US' :  I was thinking of completing my education in the US

' . . get a scholarship but with how hard that can be, . . ' :  get a scholarship, but considering how hard that can be, . .

'I may go to somewhere where Education is for free' :  I may go somewhere where education is free

' . . or not too expensive. Somewhere like Germany for example.' :   . . or not too expensive: somewhere like Germany, for example.

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Talking about myself

Hi everyone,
My name is Miriam. I'm a 20 year old woman from Syria and originally from France.

I'm in my third year of the 5-year B.Eng. degree programme studying Electronics & Telecommunications Engineering at Damascus University.

Due to everything that is going on in my country, I've decided to complete this academic year and then start applying to universities abroad. Somebody might says that I'm unpatriotic and that home is not a hotel you leave when service gets bad but I don't think I can do something "accomplish anything" by staying here.

I was thinking of completing my education in the US if I could get a scholarship but with how hard that can be, I may go to somewhere where Education is for free or not too expensive. Somewhere like Germany for example.

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Good luck with your education. Only very minor mistakes that even a native speaker might make.

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