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Ajamu! I have a pet and his name is Ajamu. Ajamu is a hedgehog and he is so adorable. This is the first time I´ve had a pet like this. Usually I always had a dogs, cats, fishes or turtles and I and my family always share the cares necessary for the health of our pets, but now Ajamu is only mine. At first time Ajamu was a gift for my sister, her boyfriend gifted to her but she wanted a ferret, he made a mistake and bought a Hedghod. My sister fear Ajamu that is why she did´t want it, because she thinks Ajamu is gonna hurt her but he don't do that. I can hold him and sometime he sleeps above my. =)

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Ajamu!

I have a pet and his name is Ajamu. Ajamu is a hedgehog and he is so adorable.

This is the first time I´ve had a pet like this. Usually I always had a dogs, cats, fishes or turtles and I and my family always share the cares necessary for the health of our pets, but now Ajamu is only mine.

At first time Actually, Ajamu was a gift for my sister, her boyfriend gifted him(if you know the gender) to her but she wanted a ferret, he made a mistake and bought a hedgehog.
My sister is afraid of (fear) hedgehogs that is why she did´t want it, because she thinks Ajamu is gonna hurt her but he doesn't do that. I can hold him without getting scared and sometime he sleeps above my. =)

 

 

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Ajamu!

I have a pet and his name is Ajamu. Ajamu is a hedgehog and he is so adorable.

This is the first time I´ve had a pet like this. Usually I always had a dogs, cats, fishes or turtles and I me and my family always shared the cares responsibility necessary for the health of our pets, but now Ajamu is only just mine.

At first, time Ajamu was a gift for my sister. Her boyfriend gifted gave it to her but she actually wanted a ferret. He made a mistake and bought a hedgehog instead.
My sister fear was afraid of Ajamu that which is why she did´t want it. because She thinks Ajamu is gonna hurt her but he don't wouldn't do that. I can hold him and sometimes he even sleeps above me. =)

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Ajamu!

I have a pet and his name is Ajamu. Ajamu is a hedgehog and he is so adorable.

This is the first time I´ve had a pet like this. Usually  I have always had a dogs, cats, fishes or turtles and I and my family always shares the cares necessary for the health of our pets, but now Ajamu is only mine.

At first time Initially/In the beginning Ajamu was a gift for my sister, her boyfriend gifted gave him to her but she wanted a ferret, he made a mistake and bought a Hedghod.
My sister fear was afraid of Ajamu that is why she did´t want it, because she thinks Ajamu is gonna going to hurt her but he don't wouldnt do that. I can hold him and sometimes he sleeps above my. =)

 

"Buen" trabajo!!  Espero que tu dia estuvo muy bueno.

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Thanks so much! I think the same! jejeje He is so cute!
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Your pet is a very nice looking hedgehog.

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