makoto
Last week a dog came to my house I usually take dogs who are in an animal shelter to my house as a volunteer. They are lost dogs. Most of them are very thin, dirty, don't believe human. I take care of them. Sometimes it takes long time to make them healthy and open their heart. Then I look for their new foster parent. All the dogs I took care found their new house. I'm so happy when I know they spend happy life with their new owner. I live with my mother. She wanted to have her own dog. I hesitated because she is old. If she will be sick, I have to have her dog till that dog's last moment of life. I'm not sure I can live for over 10 years. ( Nobody knows though..) Last week, I have decided that my mother has a dog. A dog who came to my house is cute little mixed shiba..
1 lut 2015 08:53
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Last week a dog came to my house.

 

I usually take dogs who that are in an animal shelter to my house as a volunteer.
They are lost dogs. Most of them are very thin, dirty, don't believe trust in humans.
I take care of them. Sometimes it takes long time to make them healthy and open their hearts.

Then I look for their new foster parents.

All the dogs I took have taken care have found their new home house. I'm so happy when I know they will have a spend happy life with their new owner.

I live with my mother. She wanted to have her own dog. I hesitated because she is old. If she will be becomes sick, I have to have her dog until that dog's last moment of life (it would be better to say: I will have to take care of that dog forever).
I'm not sure I can live for over 10 years. ( Nobody knows though..)

Last week, I have decided that my mother has should have a dog.

A dog who that came to my house is cute little mixed shiba..

 

Very well done, just a few grammatical errors here and there.

Your original text was, however, completely comprehensible before corrections were made.

1 lutego 2015
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