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Barcelona - Challenge one text every day About Barcelona / Part 01 Barcelona is my favorite town in all word. Well... It’s not like I already travelled around all the word, but between all cities I already know, far until now, Barcelona has enchanted me. A magical view that I have pictured in my mind, is going away from the subway in the Ramblas and finding there all illuminated with Christmas lights. The Ramblas is a beautiful boulevard who cross the city (when you are lost : a tip is find the ramblas !). There are numerals restaurants offering a magnify paella with sangrias at the ramblas. Also, there’s a lot of people from all the word walking around. In the Ramblas, you can find the municipal market : La boqueria. The market is a mix of everything : fresh fruits, catalan chocolate, cold beers, alive sea food... You can feel the incredible mix by the smell and the sounds. You can walk, walk, walk, and than stop for a caña con patatas bravas. (beer and fries with a hot sauce.) [Text 007/365. A friend (Jefferson Rodrigues) and I are going to write one text per day for one year! Please help us with corrections, suggestions and ideas.]

2 mar 2015 23:08

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Barcelona - Challenge one text every day

About Barcelona / Part 01

Barcelona is my favorite town in all the world. Well... It’s not like that I haven't already travelled been around all the world, but between among all the cities I had visited already know, far until now, Barcelona has is still the most enchanting to me. [The way you wrote implies that other cities did not enchant you at all; hence can be insulting to their denizens.]

A The magical view that I have pictured in my mind, is going away from the subway in the Ramblas and finding there all when the place was illuminated with Christmas lights. The Ramblas is a beautiful boulevard who which ["who" is for people only, everything else uses "which"] crosses the city. (when you are lost : Here's a tip when you are lost in Barcelona: Just go and is find where the Ramblas is!).

There are numerals [This means the numbers like 123] numerous restaurants offering many a magnify [This means to enlarge] magnificient paella and great with sangrias at the ramblas. Also, there’s a lot of people from all the word walking aroundAt the same time, many world visitors congregate here. In the Ramblas, you can find Located in the vicinity is the municipal market: : La Boqueria. The market is Here we can find a mix of everything, : from fresh fruits, Catalan chocolate, cold beers, to alive seafood food... Your senses can feel the incredible aromas mix by the smell and the exotic sounds. You can walk, walk, walk, and After much walking around the area, one can than stop for a caña con patatas bravas. (beer and fries with a hot sauce.).

[Text Essay 007/365.

A friend, (Jefferson Rodrigues) and I are going to write one text an essay per day for one entire year! Please help us with the corrections. Suggestions and ideas are most welcome. Thanks!]

A excellent idea. I am very sure when you have reached your goal, you would have improved vastly if you learn well from the corrections. If you have any question on what I have corrected, please ask. I don't bite and if you like me to correct your essays, just message me with the link to that particular essay. This way I won't overlook it :)

2 marca 2015