I DON'T AGREE WITH SPORTSPEOPLE Players ARE PAID TOO MUCH

Some jobs are well paid and others are not. In my opinion, all occupations are important. When there is something that needs to be done, someone must do it. a function to do is because it needs to be worked in it. Some jobs employmenst are better paid than others and it depends on the moment in time we happen to be are living in.

Nowadays, it seems that the most important jobs in the current society are football players, computer technicians, lawyers, Marketing directors, etc.

Now Currently, some sportspeople figures are paid a lot of money which I really don’t understand. that. Here in Spain, a football player earns the same amount  win the amount that the society government needs for to budget for pay 30 schools which is an unbelievable amount of money. And At the same time our schools are facing having reductions because the government doesn’t have enough money.

In my opinion, this is the result that happens because of the importance people give to football matches. and if they win the game. Society should place more importance on have to think it is more valuable to investing that money in more useful things than simply in a game.

I think all of us should re-evaluate have to change our minds and consider what is really relevant in life as  for living. it seems that we are losing our common sense.

I totally agree with you Myriam!  The majority of my changes simply make your composition sound more natural.  Keep up your good work!