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Self-introduction in Croatian Bok ljudi!Dobar dan :) Zovem se Chloe i ja iz Kine. Ja studentica učim ruski.Govorim kineski,engleski i ruski. Trenutno pokušavam naučiti neke hrvatske, kada sama slobodna,a hrvaski malo govorim. Ugodan dan!
24 maj 2015 06:52
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(Self-introduction in Croatian Uvod na hrvatskom


Bok, ljudi! Dobar dan :) Zovem se Chloe i ja sam iz Kine (I = ja;   am = sam).
Ja sam studentica i učim ruski (or Studentica sam i učim ruski; Studentica sam koja (which) uči ruski; Studiram ruski (I study Russian)). Govorim kineski, engleski i ruski.
Trenutno pokušavam naučiti neke hrvatske riječi (words), kada sama slobodna (or kada imam vremena - when I have time), a hrvatski malo govorim.

Ugodan dan!

24 maja 2015
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Self-introduction in Croatian ( Introduction is uvod in Croatian. But, in this case you are going to say : " Predstavljanje sebe na hrvatskom " )

Bok ljudi!Dobar dan :) Zovem se Chloe i ja sam iz Kine.
Ja studentica i učim ruski. Govorim kineski,engleski i ruski.
Trenutno pokušavam naučiti neke hrvatske riječi, kada sam a slobodna, a hrvatski malo (Ok, but I would say "slabo")  govorim.

Ugodan dan!

 

Ok, nice job, just keep it up. 

If you need my classes, feel free to contact me. 

If you take 10 lessons, I'll promise you're going to talk really good in Croatian in a month. 

Hope to see you soon. 

25 maja 2015
Or you can just say 'O meni'...meaning 'About me', that would cover both that's it's written in Croatian and that it's a text where you talk about yourself. Other things, I see, are already corrected :-)
27 maja 2015
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