I am working as Mechanical Engineer in Design Industrial Equipment.

Hello Franz. I'm Jayne my friend's call me Crayons becuase i do alot of drawing. I live in New Zealand and live in a little city, I'm a student Hairdresser

I made a  correction, it was the only major one i could notice and also I thought that you'd like to know that the last part can be expanded further more by putting between learn and english  to speak ( or read) so it would then become : I want to learn to speak ( read ) english fluently. I wouldn't how ever copy my grammar, as that i am not to good with I kinda just go with it .