Please is it right??? I need the correction by to tomorrow. Please plis help me

Dear Diary,
Today my best friend told me that he had decided to become a vegetarian, and this I seemed strange because he was always the first to go to McDonald's and besides loving he love the hamburgers, the kitchen and all kinds of meat too, so I was confused. but He explained to me that he decided it after seeing a video on the Internet where some persons about the slaughter of animals for food/human consumption killed animals, who after they would be our food, so after watching it he decided it to become a vegetarian because I he loves the animals.
In my opinion many people’s become vegetarian because they also love too the animals and they are against of killing animals. but I love the animals too but however I’m not against eating meat of this because some people need meat to live, maybe in the future everyone all the people will become vegetarian because we won’t have animals to eat.

Please, is this right??? I need the correction by tomorrow, please help me

Dear diary.

Today my best friend told me that he had decided to become a vegetarian. This seemed strange because he was always the first to go to McDonalds. On top of which, he loves hamburgers, the kitchen and all kinds of meat, so I was confused. However, he explained to me that he made this decision after seeing a video on the internet, where people were killing animals to eat as food. After watching it he decided to become vegetarian because he loves animals.
In my opinion, many people become vegetarian because they love animals too, and they are against the killing of animals. I love the animals too, but I’m not against eating meat because some people need meat to live. Maybe in the future everyone will become vegetarian because we won’t have animals to eat.