My father

My father is a plumber. He loves his job. He has been doing this for twtenty years.

He is tall and has wide shoulders. He has a tanned face which shows his white teeth. He has clear eyes which sparkle and although his eyebrows don't move when he feels delighted,  he arches his eyebrows if he gets upset.

I admire his work attitude, he is very responsible.

[Well done. This is very well written. 

Some questions for you.

If your father's skin on his face is a darker colour than the rest of his skin because he works in the sun, we say his face is 'tanned'. We say someone has dark skin if their skin colour is darker due to their race i.e. West Africans have dark skin colour whereas Californians are usually tanned.

'Sparkle'  is the word generally used to describe eyes. 'Gleaming' might better describe a shiny car i.e. ' the car was so clean it was gleaming'.

I'm not sure what you meant about your father's eyebrow remaining flat if he is delighted.

Good luck with your english!]