kisvadim
27/07/2015 Monday. Work. It was a usual day. Corporate picnic which maybe on tomorrow was cancelled. This evening at 6.30 Ann, Pavel and I were going went to our dacha. Ann collected gooseberries and raspberries. I broke several branches of trees. At 10.00pm I talked with Brett by Skype. It was my third lesson and we talked about diary, our cities and movies. Today is 17th day how I don't read any Russian news about politics and life in Russia. Why I must spend my time to this? What good is it? I read news only about science and IT on one site. It's my social experiment. In the free time I learn English. I think about postgraduate studies: of course it's difficult, but it's very interesting.
28 lip 2015 18:13
Poprawki · 4

27/07/2015

Monday.

Work. It was an usual day. The Corporate picnic that was supposed to happen maybe on tomorrow was cancelled.

This evening at 6.30pm, Ann, Pavel and I were going went to our dacha. Ann collected gooseberries and raspberries. I broke several branches of some trees.

At 10.00pm, I talked with Brett on Skype. It was my third lesson and we talked about whose diary> diary, our cities and movies.

Today is 17th day that I don't read any Russian news about politics and life in Russia. Why must I spend my time to this? What good is it? I read news only about science and IT on one website. It's my social experiment. In my free time I learn English.

I am thinking about postgraduate studies: of course it's difficult, but it's very interesting. You're still thinking about it! That's why we add verb + -ing.

 

Very good job.

The indefinite article that you use before a vowel (a,e,i,o,u) is an.

Example: I ate an apple. I searched for an interesting text.

 

Before a consonant (b,c,d,f,g...), you use a.

Example: I read a book. I helped a man.

 

--Ravi.

29 lipca 2015

27/07/2015

Monday.

Work. It was a usual normal day at work. The corporate/company picnic which was supposed to be maybe on tomorrow was cancelled.

This evening at 6.30,  Ann, Pavel and I went were going went to our dacha. Ann collected gooseberries and raspberries and I broke several branches off of the trees.

At 10.00pm, I talked with Brett by Skype. It was my third lesson and we talked about my diary, our cities and some movies which I watched recently.

Today is 17th day how that I haven't don't read any Russian news about politics and life in Russia. Why I must I waste spend my time to on this? What good is it? I My social experiment is to only read news only about science and IT on one website. It's my social experiment. In the I spend my free time I learning English.

I am thinking about taking postgraduate studies and although of course it's difficult, but I think it's it would be very interesting.

Another well written composition Vadim!  Keep up your good work!

30 lipca 2015
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