吃北京鸭

我和我爸爸妈妈8月14日晚上在中国饭店了。我们吃了北京鸭。太好吃啊！我们首先吃了鸭汤然后我们吃混沌。第三个菜是面皮包着鸭皮，酱和蔬菜。然后我们吃鸭肉和蛋米。餐后小吃我吃了一小杯冰激凌。我太饱啦！你可以看照片跟随这个Link：
http://user.qzone.qq.com/1279165308/mood/7c833e4c3972d055fc0f0e00.1

TRANSLATION

Eating Beijing Duck

I and my parents were on the evening of the 14th August in a Chinese restaurant. We ate Beijing Duck. It is very tasty! At first we ate duck soup, than we ate Hun Dun. The 3rd meal was duck skin together with bread in which we put the skin, sauce and vegetables. Then we ate the duck meat itself with egg rice. For dessert I had a small vanilla ice. I was so full after it! You can see the pictures by following this link: http://user.qzone.qq.com/1279165308/mood/7c833e4c3972d055fc0f0e00.1

吃北京烤鸭

我和我爸爸妈妈8月14日晚上在去了中国饭店了。我们吃了北京烤鸭。太好吃了啊！我们第一首先吃了鸭汤然后我们吃混沌馄饨。第三个菜是鸭皮肤和面包，在面包里面鸭皮肤、酱和蔬菜。我们然后吃鸭肉和蛋米蛋炒饭。餐后小吃我有吃了一个小箱子兰香草冰激凌。我真是太满饱的了阿啊！你可以看照片跟随这个Link看照片：
http://user.qzone.qq.com/1279165308/mood/7c833e4c3972d055fc0f0e00.1

Beijing Duck we call it 北京烤鸭.   北京(Beijing)烤(roasted) 鸭(duck)

When "at first" used in the middle of a sentence, we use "首先" rather than "第一".

馄饨 is actually with "饣" rather than "氵" because it is something to eat.

The skin is translated as "皮肤" only when it means the skin of a human being. If it refers to the skin of an animal, we always translated as ~(the name of the animal)+皮. Like duck skin 鸭皮, chiken skin 鸡皮。

Egg rice, do you mean the fried egg rice? If it is, you can say 蛋炒饭。Rice which has not been cooked is 米, but after it has been cooked, we call it 饭。生米煮成熟饭 actually means the rice has been cooked. 

vanilla translated into Chinese is 香草。

I am full is actually 我吃饱了。

TRANSLATION

Eating Beijing Duck

I and my parents were on the evening of the 14th August in a Chinese restaurant. We ate Beijing Duck. It is very tasty! At first we ate duck soup, than we ate Hun Dun. The 3rd meal was duck skin together with bread in which we put the skin, sauce and vegetables. Then we ate the duck meat itself with egg rice. For dessert I had a small vanilla ice. I was so full after it! You can see the pictures by following this link: http://user.qzone.qq.com/1279165308/mood/7c833e4c3972d055fc0f0e00.1