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I want to learn Japanese. I can't speak Japanese, but I want to learn, because I want to go to Japan to travel, I heard that Japan is a very civilized country, the road is very clean, I want to see the cherry blossoms.
27 sie 2015 12:14
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I want to learn Japanese.

I can't speak Japanese, but I want to learn, because I want to go to Japan to travel, I heard that Japan is a very civilized country, the roads are is very clean, I want to see the cherry blossoms.

 

You should use periods instead of commas because you have separate statements. 

30 sierpnia 2015
Hello!Thanks for coming to Japan.Hopefully you enjoy your staying in here.I'm glad that you're into cherry blossoms. こんにちは!日本に来てくれるんですね、ありがとう。滞在を楽しんでほしいです。桜に興味を持ってくれて嬉しいです。
27 sierpnia 2015
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