Thuy
Vietnam National Day Yesterday was Vietnam's Independence day. We celebrated 70 years since indepence from France. I waked up at 9 am and really really regret not watching the parade. My nephew is a soldier and he also was in the procession. After finishing the parade, he came to my house and told me a lot of. It took him 4 months to practice for that. Then we took a taxi to a restaurant. After having dinner, we went to waterside to watch fireworks. This is the first time I have watched fireworks in Hanoi. This is so amazing and awesome. It made my day. This time is very difficult to me and I will never give up. I have to try more and more to not betray previous generation and specially my parents. Nothing is impossible. Fighting!!!
3 wrz 2015 09:00
Poprawki · 2

Vietnam National Day

Yesterday was Vietnam's Independence day. We celebrated 70 years since indepence from France. I waked up at 9 am and really really regret not watching the parade. My nephew is a soldier and he also was in the procession. After finishing the parade, he came to my house and told me a lot of. It took him 4 months to practice for that. Then we took a taxi to a restaurant. After having dinner, we went to waterside to watch fireworks. This is the first time I have watched fireworks in Hanoi. This is so amazing and awesome. It made my day. This time is very difficult to me and I will never give up. I have to try more and more to not betray previous generation and specially my parents. Nothing is impossible. Fighting!!!

 

I woke up at 9 am and really really regretted not watching the parade. 

After finishing the parade, he came to my house and told me a lot about it. 

This time is very difficult for me...

 

Nice use of English :)

3 września 2015
Chcesz robić postępy szybciej?
Dołącz do społeczności uczących się i wypróbuj darmowe ćwiczenia!