Miguel
Who is Belén Esteban? In this first writting, I thought to make the tipycal writting "descrive people", but finally, have thought that it's repetitive. Allways are the same writting, and I don't like descrive people on the net that I know. I prefer descrive famous people, and now, I descrive a person that everybody is talking about her in this time: Belén Esteban. Belén Esteban was born in Madrid, and she lived in San Blas, a borough longer that the city centre. She was famous because she was a Jesulin's girlfriend. Jesulin was a very famous torero, and a lot of girls were loving him at this time. In the corridas of bulls that he showed, there were empty of young girls and they threw theirs bras when he had finished his shows. Belén and Jesulin were a daughter, Andrea, and two or three years after she was born, they finished the relationship. Belén was famous when she was whit him, but her popularity was increased when the relationship had finished, because she speaks about her life in a lot of TV programs and the people like her personality and call her "the princess of the poeple". In spanish, this answer means "the princess of the working-class". She have been a lot of problems in her life. She was addicted to cocaine. Her therapy to give up the cocaine was looked by a lot of people on TV, and everybody spoke about it. More people hate her (I hate her) because she earn much money in this TV programs, and this people think that is not right earn much money for a very rude person.
5 wrz 2015 16:50
Poprawki · 1

Who is Belén Esteban?

In this first writting, I thought to make the t<em>y</em>p<em>i</em>cal writting "descri<em>b</em>e people", but finally, have thought that it's repetitive. Allways are the same writting, and I don't like descri<em>b</em>e people on the net that I know.

I prefer <em>to</em> descri<em>b</em>e famous people, and now, I <em>will </em>descri<em>b</em>e a person that everybody is talking about <em>nowadays </em> <em>her in this time</em>: Belén Esteban.
 
Belén Esteban was born in Madrid, and she lived in San Blas, a borough <em>longer</em> <em>larger</em> tha<em>n</em> the city centre. She was famous because she was a Jesulin's girlfriend. Jesulin was a very famous torero, and a lot of girls were <em>loving</em> <em>in love with </em>him at this time. In the corridas of bulls <em>that</em> <em>where </em>he showed, there were <em>empty</em> <em>a lot </em>of young girls and they threw theirs bras when he <em>had</em> finished his shows.

Belén and Jesulin <em>were</em> <em>had </em>a daughter, Andrea, and two or three years after she was born, they finished the relationship. Belén was famous when she was w<em>ith</em> him, but her popularity <em>h</em>as increased <em>since </em><em>when</em> the relationship <em>had</em> finished, because she speaks about her life <em>o</em>n a lot of TV programs and the people like her personality and call her "the princess of the poeple". In spanish, this <em>answer</em> means "the princess of the working-class".

She <em>have been</em> <em>has had </em>a lot of problems in her life. She was addicted to cocaine. Her therapy to give up the cocaine was <em>looked</em> <em>seen  </em><em>(or: witnessed) </em>by a lot of people on TV, and everybody spoke about it.

More people hate her (I hate her) because she earn<em>s</em> <em>much</em> <em>a lot of </em>money <em>o</em>n th<em>ese </em> TV programs, and <em>this</em> people think that is not right <em>earn much money</em> for a very rude person <em>to earn so much money.</em>.

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