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What are brought to us by the ruputation I lost a pen yesterday.Tom are suspected by us.Why?For having a bad reputation.It's the bonus for a good reputation derectly and clearly. If you have had a good reputation,you could get your credit card and buy all kinds of things you like.Something ungood happened,and troubles will get away from you naturely.Perfect life!Could you believe that you didi the wrong thing and no need to be blame. All sees so good that seems not so good.In my opinion,wether a good or bad reputation are both nothing.It's just the viewpoint of others on you.It's useless,right?Nobody really cares that.The real key is that what kind of the man inside your heart.If you are good,you won't flee away when the responsibility came to you;and you are not,you won't get the good reputation. So,what's your answer?

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I lost a pen yesterday. Tom are suspected by us.I suspect Tom, Why? For having becuase he has a bad reputation.

It's the The bonuses for of having a good reputation are derectly and clearly.  simple and clear.

If you have had a good reputation, you could get your a credit card and buy all kinds of things that you like. Something ungood bad happenesd,and troubles will get away from you naturely. it can be dealt with more easily. Perfect life! Could Can you believe that you didi the wrong thing and there is no need to be blame someone else?

If All all seems so good well,  that's seems not so good.I great in my opinion, wether a good or bad reputation are both nothing.A good or bad reputation is nothing It's just the viewpoint of others on you.others viewpoint. It's useless,right? Nobody really cares about that. The real key deal is that what kind of the man you are inside your heart. If you are good, you won't flee away when the responsibility cames to you; and if you are not good inside,  you won't get the a good reputation.

So, what's your answer?

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I lost a pen yesterday. I suspect Tom, why? because he has a bad reputation.

 The bonuses of having a good reputaion are simple and clear.

If you have a good reputation you can get a credit card and buy all kinds of things that you like. If something bad happens, it can be dealt with more easily. Perfect life! Can you believe you that you did the wrong thing and there is no need to blame someone else?

 If all seems well, thats not so great in my opinon. A good or bad reputation is nothing, it's just others viewpoint. It's useless right? Nobody cares about that. The real deal is what kind of man you are inside your heart. If you are good, you wont flee responsibilty when it comes to you, and if you are not good inside, you wont get a good reputation.

 So what's your awnser?

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