China's youngers' confusion:"Escaping from Beishangguang"and"escaping back to Beishangguang" In 2011,a book called was published.And this book leads to a discussion among media. "Beishangguang"is

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China's youngers' confusion:"Escaping from Beishangguang"and"escaping back to Beishangguang" In 2011,a book called was published.And this book leads to a discussion among media. "Beishangguang"is short from "Beijing、Shanghai、Guangzhou"(now,Shenzhen has also been included），the bigest cities in china."Escaping from Beishangguang"means leaving the first-tier cities then working and living in the low-tier cities. What are the reasons make people want to escape?Firstly,and also the main reson is the higher and higher living cost.As we know,the population of first-tier cities becomes biger and biger,rent becomes higher.To me, When I earned 3thousand per month,I need to pay one third of my salary to rent a safe and clean room in one apartment.Secondly,the press comes from work.The working rhythm in a big city is very fast,this cause big press,people are lack of rest time and private time for entertainment。Although they earn big money,their lives' quality is not high.The third reason is that they are worried about their families especially aged parents. But,the media found a lot of people are "Escaping back to Beishangguang".Agirl who had been a officer in her hometown after she escaped from Beijing,but one year later,she came back to Beijing again."In the small cities,you need to compete by using your father"she said.This sentence means you'd better have strong family background to support your life.In traditional chinese social relationship net,your parents' and your relatives social relationship are important.Whatever you want to do,finding a good job,starting a store,sending your chirldren to a good school,even seeing the doctor,you need to using your social relationship to make sure you can get the chance to compete with others.In big cities,you will be treat fairly because most of things can be executed based on rules.For this kind of respetion ,many people come back to Beishangguang again.

24 lis 2015 02:47

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China's youngers' confusion:"Escaping from Beishangguang" and "escaping back to Beishangguang"

In 2011, a book called "Escaping from Beishangguang" was published, and the theme of the book

stirred up controversy among media(/drew media attention). "Beishangguang" is a short form of "Beijing、Shanghai、Guangzhou(now, Shenzhen has also been included)", the biggest cities in China. Therfore, "Escaping from Beishangguang" means leaving the first-tier cities and working and living in the low-tier cities.

What are the reasons people escape from the big cities? Firstly, the living costs is too high. As the population of first-tier cities increases, the rent increases. In my case, I earn three thousand yuan per month, but I need to pay one third of my salary to rent a safe and clean room (in an apartment.) Secondly, there is pressure comes from the work. The working speed in a big city is very fast, which causes high pressure. Also, people are lack of rest time and private time for entertainment. Although they earn much money, the quality of life is not good. Thirdly, they are worrying about their families, especially aged parents in their home town.

However, the media also found a lot of people are "Escaping back to Beishangguang". A girl, had escaped from Beijing, and had been an officer in her hometown, returned back to Beijing again after one year later. She said, "in the small cities, one need to compete by using their father's power". It means you'd better have a strong family background to support your life. In the traditional Chinese society, social relationships, your parents' and your relatives' social networks, are important.

Whatever you want to do; finding a good job, starting a store, sending your chirldren to a good school, even seeing a renowned doctor, you need to use your familey's social relationships to make sure you win the competition with others. In the big cities, you will be treated fairly because most of things are executed based on the rules. For this kind of reason, many people come back to Beishangguang again.

Let's expect more good corrections by native speakers.

27 listopada 2015