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I am so excited because... Today I'm going to talk about my experience in Canada. I think that it was the best experience in my life because when I was in Toronto I met many people from different countries who spoke different languages. Also, while there I learned English, and today I'm trying to write about my trip. Canada is similar to my country because it's multicultural, and is a beautiful place. When I stayed there, I lived with a Philippino family, it was an excellent homestay, I miss Toronto, Finally I can also say that beyond these educational experiences, I met my soul mate!
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I am so excited because... Today i will talk about my experience in Canada. I think it was the best experience in my live because when I was in Toronto I meet/met many people from different countries and/who spoke different languages. Also I/I also learned English and today I try/trying to write about my trip. Canada is similar to my country because its multicultural and beautiful. When I stayed there I lived with Philippine family, They/It was a excellent homestay, I miss Toronto.
Finally I can also say that beyond being met my soul mate!(I'm not sure what you're meant to say)
Finally i can also say that im closer to met my soul mate
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I am so excited because... Today I talk about my experience in Canada. I think it was the best experience in my live because when I was in Toronto I meet met many people from different countries and who speak different languages. Also I learned English and today I try to writte about my trip. Canada is similar to my countries [I think you mean "country"?] because its it is a multicultural and beautiful place. When I stayed there, I lived with Philippine Filipino family. They It was a excellent homestay. I miss Toronto. Finally I can also say that beyond being met my soul mate! << I don't understand this sentence. Can you phrase it another way?
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