Tiffany - because this is a website for learning languages we should respect the language we are learning.  That means that this is not the right place to use "texting style" English, like "i" or "cause" or other texting short cuts.  Texting is fine friend to friend on a cell phone.  Even in emails we should use proper spelling and grammar... it's a good habit to develop.  OK?

red text = mistake/error
blue text = correction
green text = my suggestions, explanations or comments 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hi~ everybody~ i`m a college student of in China~ the first thing that i want to say is i like english English very much but my memery memory is bad
[the names of languages are always Capitalized, e.g. English, Chinese, French, Spanish]

~ that means i often forget the words i learned right now I recently learned / I just learned

~ i hope i can talk to u gays in english to improve my english level~ of course people who wanna [Do I need to explain "wanna"?... it's slang] learn chinese Chinese can talk to me everytime u anytime you like

~ i`m very happy to teach you~ and this is my pleasure. it would be my pleasure

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hi~ everybody~ i`m a college student of China~ the first thing that i want to say is i like english very much but my memery is bad~ that means i often forget the words i learned right now ~ i hope i can talk to u guys in english to improve my english level~ of course people who wanna learn chinese can talk to me everytime u like~ i`m very happy to teach you~ and this is my pleasure.