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GOING TO WORK ABROAD: AN EXCITING OPPORTUNITY OR A SCARY ONE?
Every year, more and more people are going to work abroad because the prospect of working abroad seems better or they can't find a job according to their studies.
Working abroad has a lot of advantages. The main advantage is that you will learn a new language, because you will be speaking the language of this country all the time. Another advantage is, to gain experience and increase your self-confidence. In addition, traveling lets you to know about different kinds of people and know different cultures.
On the other hand, there are also some important disadvantages. An important disadvantage is that your family and friends are far away and you can be homesick very soon. Another disadvantage is that you have to be extremely responsible because you are alone in a new city. In case of an accident you can not just call a friend or family. You're on your own.
To sum up, working abroad have both advantages and disadvantages. Whether it suit you or not depends on your personality, the ability to adapt to environment and to live without family or friends.
31 mar 2016 13:21
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GOING TO WORK ABROAD: AN EXCITING OPPORTUNITY OR A SCARY ONE?
Every year, more and more people are going to work abroad because the prospect of working abroad seems better or they can't find a job according to their studies.Working abroad has a lot of advantages. The main advantage is that you will learn a new language, because you will be speaking the language of this country all the time. Another advantage is, to gain experience and increase your self-confidence. In addition, traveling lets you to know about different kinds of people and know ('learn about' a little bit better) different cultures.
On the other hand, there are also some important disadvantages. An important disadvantage is that your family and friends are far away and you can be homesick very soon. Another disadvantage is that you have to be extremely responsible because you are alone in a new city. In case of an accident you can not just call a friend or family. You're on your own.
To sum up, working abroad have both advantages and disadvantages. Whether it suits you or not depends on your personality, the ability to adapt to environment and to live without family or friends.
Really well done! I took out some commas as I thought it made the sentences too choppy, but that is a style choice. Otherwise only one small mistake. Super job!
31 marca 2016
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