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Saint Petersburg (Part 1)
Saint Petersburg is the most beautiful city in Russia, and this is so true for me.When I was there I just loved everything, this is a really interesting city, It was funded by Pietr I, The "Northern Venice" people say, it has a very beautiful architecture, a lot of rivers ( fontanka, nieva, moika, etc), many interesting places too: the "church of the spilled blood", "Pietor Pavloskiy fortress", the "Saint Isaac Cathedral", the "Museum of the Political History of Russia" and my favourite place the "Military Historical Museum of Artillery, Engineers and Signal Corps"
correction: very well written
Saint Petersburg (Part 1)
Saint Petersburg is the most beautiful city in Russia, and this is so true for me.
When I was there I just loved everything, this is a really interesting city. It was funded by Pietr I. The "Northern Venice" people say, it has a very beautiful architecture, a lot of rivers ( Fontanka, Nieva, Moika, etc), many interesting places too: the "Church of the spilled blood", "Pietor Pavloskiy Fortress", the "Saint Isaac Cathedral", the "Museum of the Political History of Russia" and my favourite place the "Military Historical Museum of Artillery, Engineers and Signal Corps".
- Remember to put capital letters for the names of places.
- It is also important to put full stops in at the end of sentences. treat each sentences as a new idea.
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