My first notebook entry
To be honest, I have no idea about in my first notebook.There are to much topics I want to talk with you,with my dear friends.I want to talk about the weather because it's pleasant today. I want to talk about the dog I have meet today because it is so cute that let me have ideas about keeping a dog. I want to talk about myself so that you can learn more about me.I want to talk about a lot of things.But every topic is encumbered when I started to write it down in English. Do you sometimes feel the same way in writing? Share it with me please.
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My first notebook entry
To be honest, I have no idea what to write about in my first notebook entry.There are too many topics I want to talk about with you, my dear friends.I want to talk about the weather because it's pleasant today. I want to talk about the dog I met today because it was so cute that it gave me ideas about getting a dog. I want to talk about myself so that you can learn more about me. I want to talk about a lot of things, but every topic is encumbered when I started to write it down in English. Do you sometimes feel the same way? Share it with me please.0
My first notebook entry
To be honest, I have no idea what to write about about in my first notebook. There are too many topics I want to talk about with you, with my dear friends. I want to talk about the weather because it's pleasant today. I want to talk about the dog I met today because it is so cute that let me have ideas I thought about keeping the dog (could use pronoun here). I want to talk about myself so that you can learn more about me. I want to talk about a lot of things. But every topic is encumbered when I started to write it down in English. Do you sometimes feel the same way in writing? Share it with me please.The second sentence might sound better written "there are too many things I want to tell you." It's a little more informal/natural.
I feel the same way in other languages! You are much more eloquent in English than I am in my second languages. It took me like 15 minutes to write half a paragraph in Japanese, and the topics are not nearly as high level as I usually like to express myself. But the more you work on it, the better you get, and the more you can say. :)
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