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today Today is wednesday,It is very pleasently and windly.The most important is not rained today.but I am not very happy in today,beacuse I was busy, I had all the time in the school and learned english and others.I feel a little tried. In the evening ,I had a rest recently,My friend and I went to climea and watched a movie which made by American,It is about friendship betwend four girls.I love it!

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Today

Today is wednesday,It is very pleasently and windly.The most important is not rained today.but I am not very happy in today,beacuse I was busy, I had all the time in the school and learned english and others.I feel a little tried.
In the evening ,I had a rest recently,My friend and I went to climea and watched a movie which made by American,It is about friendship betwend four girls.I love it!

 

Today is Wednesday, it is very pleasant, but windy.  Most importantly, it hasn't rained today.  However, I am not very happy because I have been busy.  I spent all day at school and learned Englislh and other subjects.  I feel very tired.

This evening, I had a rest.  Then my friend and I went to the cinema to watch an American movie.  It was about the friendship between four girls.  I loved it!

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Today

Today it is Wednesday and very pleasant and windy. The most important thing is that it has not rained today but I am not very happy about today because I was busy. I spent all the time in the school and learned English and other things. I feel a little tried.
In the evening, I had a rest recently. My friend and I went to the Crimea and watched a movie which made by Americans. It is about the friendship between four girls. I loved it!

Very well written.

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I think so~
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Today is really a substantial day for you. Adequate rest is good for your health.

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