my letter To give some examples in Afghanistan, under the Taliban’s regime I have written stories on refugee camps, and women and child situations. In Serbia, during wartime, I made reports about impu

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my letter To give some examples in Afghanistan, under the Taliban’s regime I have written stories on refugee camps, and women and child situations. In Serbia, during wartime, I made reports about impunity and breaching the rule of law during the Milosevic era, and in Kosovo I investigated on human rights in situations of conflict, violence and insecurity. One of the things I like about my journalist work is the fact that I have an opportunity to let people's stories be heard.

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Hi Valerie. This is a lovely effort and a very interesting read! It sounds like you've experienced a great deal in your line of work.

You've made use of some interesting language here and the final sentence, in particular, really reads well. The start of your letter is rather direct and may benefit from another sentence of introduction. For example, 'My work as a journalist has exposed me to the hardships faced by many people across the world'.

I hope this helps! Hugh

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To give some examples in Afghanistan, under the Taliban’s regime I have written stories on refugee camps, and the situation with women and children situations. In Serbia, during wartime, I made reports about impunity and breaching the rule of law during the Milosevic era, and in Kosovo I investigated on (the abuse of) human rights in during situations of conflict, violence and insecurity. One of the things I like about my journalist work as a journalist is the fact that I have an opportunity to let people's stories be heard.

my letter

To give some examples in Afghanistan; under the Taliban’s regime I have written stories on refugee camps, and the plight of women and child there. In Serbia, during wartime, I made reports about impunity and breaching the rule of law during the Milosevic era, and in Kosovo I investigated human rights during conflict, violence and insecurity. One of the things I like about my journalist work is the fact that I have an opportunity to let people's stories be heard.

Very well written!

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