I'd love to have Hello newly. In this case, I would like to talk about the thing that lack in my life. This thing is a dog, of course. As I see it, and such I just said in other entry I in love dogs.

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I'd love to have Hello newly. In this case, I would like to talk about the thing that lack in my life. This thing is a dog, of course. As I see it, and such I just said in other entry I in love dogs. Other people wants to have more money or more power, but I from my point of view, I have things enough. On the other hand, I live in a flat and that dog enjoy a lot in a big house with garden, but near of my home we could for long walks. To sum up, everybody wants to have a better house or a great car, but in my case prefer a dog which my family and I could enjoy the nature.

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I'd Love to Have

Hello newly again.*
In this case This time, I would like to talk about the thing that I lack in my life. This thing is a dog, of course.
As I see it, and such as I had just said in another entry, I in love dogs.
Other people wants to have more money or more power, but I from my point of view, I have enough things enough.
On the other hand, I live in a flat and that dogs enjoy a lot in a big house with garden more, but although near of my home we could go for long walks.
To sum up, everybody wants to have a better house or a great car, but in my case, I prefer a dog with which my family and I could enjoy the nature.

*"Hello newly" is not an expression.

Something I'd love to have

Hello Newly.
In this case, I would like to talk about the thing I lack in my life. This thing is a dog, of course.
As I see it, and such I just said in my other entry that I love dogs.
Other people want to have more money or more power, but from my point of view, I have things enough.
On the other hand, I live in a flat and that dog enjoy a lot a big house with a garden, but near my home we could go for long walks.
To sum up, everybody wants to have a better house or a great car, but in my case I prefer a dog with which/whom my family and I could enjoy nature.

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