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Bored... probléms occur everywhere, anytime... each time you feel like you're in your most happiest days, you just fall down. something unknown would hold you back with a punch on your face.... you wouldn't know what's wrong, you wouldn't care about the reason, you wouldn't think about a solution cause after all this is life... you've gotten used to it, you've already had enough... but.... this is not the end, i'm not talking about the famous saying " never give up"... actually right now i would tell you just give up, it doesn't diserve all this worry. i'm actually refering to the moment when you feel so empty and nothing can actually fill this gap inside of your heart.....

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probléms occur everywhere, anytime (or you could say "problems can occur everywhere, at any time," or "problems occur all the time")... each time when you feel like you're in at your most happiest days, you just fall down. something unknown would hold you back with a punch on your to the face....
you wouldn't know what's wrong, you wouldn't care about the reason, you wouldn't think about a solution cause after all this is life... you've gotten used to it, you've already had enough...(might be better to use "don't" instead of "wouldn't" throughout this train of thought)
but.... this is not the end, i'm not talking about the famous saying " never give up"... actually right now i would tell you just give up, it doesn't diserve deserve all this worry (would be good to explain what "it" is that isn't deserving of worry). i'm actually refering to the moment when you feel so empty and nothing can actually fill this gap inside of your heart.....

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