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13/07/16 I have been in Australia since last September. I feel like I'm spending day by day like lazy, but also I feel like I have done a lot of things. I might not have changed before come to Australia ( my weight is definitely getting fat though haha). Sometimes I was thinking about to stay longer but I will not do it. I used to think about living overseas one day, but I realized that I actually like my country. There are my family and friends in my country. I miss a lot of things. So I decided to go back to Japan in August. My visa can stay until September. Thank you for reading.

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13/07/16

I have been in Australia since last September.
I feel like I'm lazily spending each day. Yet, I feel like I have done a lot of things.
I might not have changed before coming to Australia ( my weight is definitely getting heavier though haha).

Sometimes I thought about to staying longer but I will not do it. I used to think about living overseas one day, but I realized that I actually like my country. There are my family and friends in my country. I miss a lot of things.
So I decided to go back to Japan in August. My visa can allows me to stay until September.

Thank you for reading.
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13/07/16

I have been in Australia since last September.
I feel like I'm spending day by day each day  lazy lazily, but also I I also feel like I have done a lot of things.
I might not have changed before since coming to Australia ( my weight is definitely getting fat though haha).  "I have definitely gained weight" "I have definitely put on pounds" couple examples that sound natural.

Sometimes I was thinking about to staying longer but I will not do it (but i decided against it sounds more natural). I used to think about living overseas one day, but I realized that I actually like my country. There are my family and friends in my country. I miss a lot of things,
so I decided to go back to Japan in August even though my visa can stay until September. 

Thank you for reading.


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