Ballet Dream
When I see the girls dance in the movie, I will be very jealous of their elegant temperament. I wish I am one of them, especially when my mother speaks highly of these dancing girls. Actually, my mother once had tried to send me to learn ballet, but I was too small and couldn’t enjoy the class. I always skipped the class and then went to play with my friends. Later my mother found the truth and she had gave up asking me to learn ballet. Now I feel regretful, if I insist, I could be the girl that let my parents be proud of. The lucky thing is that I have find the things I am interested in and I will not give up.
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Ballet Dream
When I see the girls dance in the movies, I am very jealous of their elegant temperament. I wish I was one of them, especially when my mother speaks highly of those dancing girls. Actually, my mother once tried to send me to ballet lessons, but I was too young and didn't enjoy the class. I would always skip the class and go play with my friends. When my mother found out the truth, she gave up asking me to learn ballet. Now I feel regretful. If I tried, I could be the girl that my parents would be proud of. I am lucky that I have found the things I am interested in and I will not give them up.0
The lucky thing is that I have found the things I am interested in and I will not give up.
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