Mom, you are the most beautiful girl.
"Do you want a wife? my baby."I asked my three-year-old son.
"No,mom, a Thomas train is enough."my little thing answered.
"Em...do you like sister YaoYao?"l asked.
"Yes."
"Why?"
"She is pretty."he smiled and answered.
"Em... who is more beautiful , YaoYao or TongTong?"
He thought for a moment, and said:"YaoYao."
"Well,what about YaoYao and XuanXuan? who is more beautiful?"I continued.
"Em...YaoYao...oh,no, XuanXuan..." He wasn't so sure.
"So, who is the most beautiful girl in all of the girls you have known？"
My baby looked at me with a smile ,and said:"My Mom!"
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hello zhouyingying, this is all correct, so I will just add some suggestions to make it sound more natural.
Mom, you are the most beautiful girl.
"Do you want a wife? my baby."I asked my three-year-old son."No mom, a Thomas train is enough."my little boy answered.
"Umm ...do you like sister YaoYao?" l asked.
"Yes."
"Why?"
"She is pretty." he smiled as he answered.
"Umm ... who is more beautiful , YaoYao or TongTong?"
He thought for a moment, and said:"YaoYao."
"Well,what about YaoYao and XuanXuan? who is more beautiful?"I continued.
"Umm ...YaoYao...oh,no, XuanXuan..." He wasn't so sure.
"So, who is the most beautiful girl in all of the girls you have known？"
My baby looked at me with a smile ,and said: "My Mom!"
Notes: words to lead into a sentence:
"umm ... " is used informally, or possibly "erm"
"well ..." would be more formal.
It's a very cute story, that made me smile.
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This is one of the nicest stories I've ever found on italki. Very nice! (When my sons were small, they also liked Thomas the Train).
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