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Free time To be honest, lately I don't have a lot of free time. But if I have a couple of hours and I don't want to sleep, I watch films or TV shows. I watch all kinds of movies. I think that watching TV series or films is a great way to manage stress. By laughing at comedy, crying at tragedy or freaking out watching scary movies, I have an opportunity to clear my mind. I also spend a lot of time in the Internet. I know that aimless surfing is just waste of time, and I know that life on-line can replace reality. But on the other hand, thanks to the Internet, I can chat with my friends, search for new information, watch movies and read books. I spend a lot of time reading comics or scrolling on tumblr. It's a way to relax, for me. I also try to find time for reading, but lately I haven't had a lot of time for it. However, I listen to audio books instead.

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Free Time

To be honest, lately I don't have a lot of free time. But if I have a couple hours and I don't want to sleep, I watch films or TV shows.

I watch movies regardless of its their genre. I think that watching series or films is a great way to manage stress. By laughing at comedy, crying at tragedy and or freaking out at watching  ("at" is ok but it doesn't sound right, it's easy to confuse with you are "at the scary  movies") scary movies, I have an opportunity to clear my mind.

Also I spend a lot of time in the Internet. I know that purposelessly surfing is just waste of time, and I know that life on-line replaces reality. But on the other hand,  thanks to the internet,  I can chat with my friends, search new information, watch movies and read books thanks to the Internet. I spend a lot of time by reading comics or scrolling tumblr. It's kinda  a way ("kinda" just like "wanna" and "gonna" etc are appropriate in dialog but not in writing) to relax for me.

Also I try to find time for reading, but lately I haven't had a lot of time for it. However,  I am able to listen to audio books instead.

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Free time

To be honest, lately I don't have a lot of free time. But if I have a couple of hours and I don't want to sleep, I watch films or TV shows.

I watch movies regardless of its genre of all genres [more informally we would say "all kinds of movies"]. I think that watching TV series or films is a great way to manage stress. By laughing at comedy, crying at tragedy and freaking out at scary movies, I have an opportunity to clear my mind.

Also I also spend a lot of time in the Internet [a bit more common word order, but both are correct]. I know that purposelessly random [or aimless; your word is also correct but less commonly used] surfing is just waste of time, and I know that life on-line can replace reality. But on the other hand I can chat with my friends, search for ["search for" is a prepositional verb] new information, watch movies and read books, thanks to the Internet. I spend a lot of time by reading comics or scrolling on  tumblr. It's kinda a way to relax, for me.

Also I also [see comment above] try to find time for reading, but lately I haven't found a lot of time for it. However, I listen to audio books instead.

Nicely written - minor stylistic and grammar corrections.




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