Snowflake
It's getting cold everyday here.
Citrus fruits are turning yellow in the yard.
That tells me that winter is coming.
It snowed yesterday at last.
Snowflakes were falling on green leaves.
That made ripeness stand out.
My mother told me that all the color was inverted outside.
And then I found that hiding something is emerging other thing.
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Snowflake
It's getting colder every day here.Citrus fruits are turning yellow in the yard.
That tells me that winter is coming.
It snowed yesterday at last.
Snowflakes were falling on green leaves.
That made the (fruit's) ripeness stand out.
My mother told me that all the color was inverted outside.
And then I found that hiding something is emerging other thing.
And then I found that hidden things emerge from other things.
Or... And then I found that hidden things were emerging from other things. (I hope this is what you meant!)
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So poetic!
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