My future plan
Hello everyone .Nice to meet you .I'm Zhaoyi, a girl from China .
l am wondering to see the world outside My motherland intensely. To experience varienties lifestyles that quite different from My hometown's is exciting,right?
So,l plan to live in Europe in the future.I like European's lifestyles.
（P.S.welcome to revise my essay,or be my friend.Thank you for finish reading ）
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My future plan
Hello everyone. Nice to meet you. I'm Zhaoyi, a girl from China.l am wondering to see the world outside M my motherland intensely. To experience varienties various lifestyles that are quite different from M my hometown's is exciting, right?
So, l plan to live in Europe in the future. I like the European's lifestyles.
（P.S. You are welcome to revise my essay, or be my friend. Thank you for finish reading.）
Hi, Zhaoyi! When talking about yourself, "I" is the only word that starts with a capital letter. "Me," and "my" are lower-case if they are in the middle of the sentence. For example: "I took my dog for a walk."
Periods (.) and commas (,) only have a space after them. I have corrected them in your text, but I wasn't able to highlight them.
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My Future Plan
Hello everyone .Nice to meet you .I'm Zhaoyi, a girl from China .*l am very much hoping/[wondering] to see the world outside my own country/[motherland]* intensely, to experience varienties lifestyles that are quite different from my hometown's is exciting, right ?*
So, l plan to live in Europe in the future. I like the European's lifestyles.
（P.S.welcome to revise my essay,or be my friend.Thank you for finish reading ）
* ' I am hoping to see . .' or 'I am looking forward to seeing . .' or 'I hope to see . .' or 'I look forward to seeing . .'
* 'motherland' is a word often used in patriotic songs, but is not appropriate in everyday conversation
* you might say '. . .is exciting, right ?' but you wouldn't write it [unless it is a transcript of a conversation]
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My future plan
Hello everyone. Nice to meet you. I'm Zhaoyi, a girl from China.l am wondering to see the world outside my motherland intensely. To to experience varienties variuos lifestyles that are quite different from mine. My hometown's I think it is exciting, right isn't it?
So, l have a plan to live in Europe in the future, because I like European's lifestyles.
（P.S. welcome to revise my essay, or be my friend. Thanks you for your attention finish reading ）
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