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presidential inauguration day The presidential inauguration Day is on 1th March. The building which held the inauguration was decorated solemnly , all of things were laid out immaculately. The multitude of people trailed to watch directly the celebration although the weather was scalding .The new president presented a powerful motivational speech for 3 hours . And he finished up the speech superbly. A adored girl offered a big flower to the new president. Finally, the new president selected some own assistants who work with him years. The chosen men are so vivacious. They all are accomplished in own fields. The first work of the new president is assisting the ravenous people who have spent the terrified earthquake disaster. Lots of leaguer oppose government building the dam on Red river. The dam is so perilous when the incident disaster happens. Maybe it will make the new president quite tired to solve it. The government has to solve the destitute status in the Western area. The talents are leaving the state-owned company and come in the international companies which pay colossal salary. The new president was considered as an unyielding politician. All people believed in him.

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The presidential inauguration Day is on 1th March the 1st of March. The building which held the inauguration in which the inauguration took place was decorated solemnly, all of the things were laid out immaculately. The multitude of people trailed to watch directly the celebration although the weather was scalding .The new president presented held a powerful motivational speech for 3 hours that lasted 3 hours, and he finished up the speech superbly superbly finished the speech //It would be ideal to finish this sentence with a certain action of the president, in example : "superbly finished the speech with his promises for the following mandate"// A adored fan/little girl offered a big flower to the new president. //With either of these words the sentence is complete, and with the word "little", if chosen, you also make it look like an oxymoron, it may not be one, but it has that element of contradiction, an oxymoron is, let's say "A small big dog" , the oxymoron is defined by the descriptive words of an object/phenomenon being in contradiction, thus "a small big dog" is an oxymoron"//
Finally, the new president selected some own a few personal assistants who work with him years that have been working with him for years. //the word "some" is more general and can be used for a variety of objects/phenomenons, and is, as a matter of fact, typically used for objects, or for unimportant people, in example : " some papers were left on the desk when I left from work, some idiots broke into our home last night", you get the idea, therefore, it is ideal that in this very sentence we use the words "a few" instead of "some", as it refers to important and respectable people// The chosen men are so vivacious. They all are accomplished in All of them are accomplished people in their own fields.
The first work task //"work" is a general word, mostly used for a full-time job, or a job in a specific domain, meanwhile the word "task" is used for one-time assignments, in example assisting a child with his homework and so on, the word task is also usually used when the very assignment is given to a person by someone else, a teacher, or a boss, but can be freely used when the task has been accepted by a person at their own will"// of the new president is assisting the ravenous people who that have spent survived the terrified terrifying earthquake disaster. //the word "spent" is used for vacations, weekends, and so on, i.e. "I spent my summer in Dubai"//

It looks like I cant edit the rest of your text because of the characters limit,

My opinion is that you need to work on how to form sentences, so you can get the idea, and therefore understand the mechanism of the English language,

Best of luck,

Oliver.

The presidential inauguration Day is on the 1st of March. The building in which the inauguration took place was decorated solemnly, all the things were laid out immaculately. The multitude of people trailed to watch directly the celebration although the weather was scalding. The new president held a powerful motivational speech that lastest 3 hours, and he superbly finished the speech with his promises for the following mandate. A little girl offered a big flower to the new president. Finally, the new president selected a few personal assistants that have been working with him for years. The chosen man are so vivacious. All of them are accomplished people in their own fields. The first task of the new president is assisting to the ravenous people that have survived the terrifying earthquake disaster. Lots of leaguer oppose government building the dam on Red river. The dam is so perilous when the incident disaster happens. Maybe it will make the new president quite tired to solve it. The government has to solve the destitute status in the Western area. The talents are leaving the state-owned company and come in the international companies which pay colossal salaries. The new president was considered an unyielding politician. All people believed in him.

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