A place I like I like to read the book at front of my desk in my book room. There are two huge windows on the left side of my desk. I can look the sky through my window when I feel tired of reading.

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A place I like I like to read the book at front of my desk in my book room. There are two huge windows on the left side of my desk. I can look the sky through my window when I feel tired of reading. My desk always keep tidy, because I don't like too many stuffs stacked on my desk. I only put a laptop and some books unfinished on my desk. I can spend whole day staying here and never feel bored. Using my laptop and reading are my favorite things when I stay here.

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A place I like

I like to read a book at my desk in my book room.
There are two huge windows on the left side of my desk.
I can look at the sky through them when I feel tired of reading.

My desk is always kept tidy, because I don't like too much stuff stacked on it. I only put a laptop and some unfinished books on my desk. I can spend the whole day here and never feel bored. Using my laptop and reading are my favorite things when I stay here.

Very well written!

A place I like

I like to read the (1) a book in front of my desk in my book (2) study room.
There are two huge windows on the left side of my desk.
I can look at the sky through my window when I feel tired of reading.

My desk (3) is always kept tidy, because I don't like too much stuffs stacked on my desk. I only put a laptop and some unfinished books unfinished on my desk. I can spend the whole day staying here and never feel bored. Using my laptop and reading are my favorite things when I stay here.

Hi Kin,

Just a few suggestions:

(1) We use "a" as we are not indicating specific details of a specific book. Therefore, we do not use "the".

(2) It sounds off to use "book room" in English although it means 书房 in Mandarin. I changed it to "study room".

(3) It is a grammar rule to use "is/are/was/were" with a verb in the past participle form (e.g is kept)

Hope this helps.

Cheers, Lance

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