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Sick leave Today the weather is sunny, I hear some noise and sometime people talking, There is a lot of vitality in the street, but I can't go out my house, because i'm sick (fever) Actually today i'm better than yesterday, I should rest, so I'm just watching videos on YouTube and some news of match football today, I think two days of rest are enough,so Tomorrow I should to go to work. I hope that every patient will recover. bay :)

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Today the weather is sunny. I hear some noise and sometimes hear people talking, There is a lot of vitality in the street, but I can't go out of my house, because I'm sick (I have a fever).
Actually today I'm better than yesterday. I should rest, so I'm just watching videos on YouTube and some news of a football match today, I think two days of rest are enough, so Tomorrow I should to go to work.
I hope that every patient will recover.
bye :)
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Today, the weather is sunny. I hear some noise, and sometimes, people are talking. There is a lot of vitality in the streets, but I can't go out leave my house, because I'm sick with a fever.

Actually, today I'm better today than yesterday. I should rest, so I'm just watching videos on YouTube and catching up on some news of about a football match football today. I think two days of rest are enough, so tomorrow, I should to go to work.
I hope that every patient will recover.
bay Bye :)

Hi Ayub! Please be aware of English's punctuation rules. You are overusing the comma and not using the period enough. Periods end sentences (not just paragraphs). Also, please be aware that there is a space after each comma and period.

Feel better soon! =)

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