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A Sad New Day A sad new day in my beautiful city. Yesterday night another announce made by the goverment has broken our hope for a better future. This is not a political essay, it is just a sad thought in loud voice. My tears are on their own! it was once a song for me, today is my reality. Maybe I am living in the last freedom period of my country. This is not a thing I will watch on television in a few years, it is something bad I am living! I am so sad, and I know it is too difficultd for you who live in another country to understand us. Thanks for reading me.

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A Sad New Day

A sad new day in my beautiful city.

Yesterday night => Last night another announcement made by the government has broken our hope for a better future.  

This is not a political essay, it is just a sad thought in loud voice. My tears are on their own! it was once a song for me, today is => it's my reality.    

(sad thought in a loud voice -or- sad thought spoken aloud)

Maybe I am living in the last freedom period of my country. This is not a thing I will watch on television in a few years, it is something bad I am living!

I am so sad, and I know it is too difficultd for you who live in another country to understand us.

Thanks for reading me. => this.

(I'm so sorry that you and your country are going through such a hard time. I hope things improve.)

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A Sad New Day

A sad new day in my beautiful city.

Yesterday night there was another announcement made by the government that has broken our hope for a better future.

This is not a political essay, it is just a sad thought in loud voice. My tears are on their own! it was once a song for me, today is my reality.

Maybe I am living in the last period of freedom of my country. This is not a thing I will watch on television in a few years, it is something bad I am living!

I am so sad, and I know it is too difficult for those of you who live in another country to understand us.

Thanks for reading me.

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