A Sad New Day
A sad new day in my beautiful city.
Yesterday night another announce made by the goverment has broken our hope for a better future.
This is not a political essay, it is just a sad thought in loud voice. My tears are on their own! it was once a song for me, today is my reality.
Maybe I am living in the last freedom period of my country. This is not a thing I will watch on television in a few years, it is something bad I am living!
I am so sad, and I know it is too difficultd for you who live in another country to understand us.
Thanks for reading me.
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A Sad New Day
A sad new day in my beautiful city.Yesterday night => Last night another announcement made by the government has broken our hope for a better future.
This is not a political essay, it is just a sad thought in loud voice. My tears are on their own! it was once a song for me, today is => it's my reality.
(sad thought in a loud voice -or- sad thought spoken aloud)
Maybe I am living in the last freedom period of my country. This is not a thing I will watch on television in a few years, it is something bad I am living!
I am so sad, and I know it is too difficultd for you who live in another country to understand us.
Thanks for reading me. => this.
(I'm so sorry that you and your country are going through such a hard time. I hope things improve.)
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A Sad New Day
A sad new day in my beautiful city.Yesterday night there was another announcement made by the government that has broken our hope for a better future.
This is not a political essay, it is just a sad thought in loud voice. My tears are on their own! it was once a song for me, today is my reality.
Maybe I am living in the last period of freedom of my country. This is not a thing I will watch on television in a few years, it is something bad I am living!
I am so sad, and I know it is too difficult for those of you who live in another country to understand us.
Thanks for reading me.
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