JUST A DIARY ON JUN.5th I would like someone to correct my diary entry. Could you do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.5th There are a bunch of adorable characters in Japan. I would pi

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JUST A DIARY ON JUN.5th I would like someone to correct my diary entry. Could you do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.5th There are a bunch of adorable characters in Japan. I would pick up some adorable characters I think so here, Pikachu, Doraemon, Mario or whatever. This time, I would say what do I feel about Pikachu as I like it the best of them. As you know, Pikachu is a character in Anime 'Pokemon', I guess Anime 'pokemon' made it be more popular and famous, you know the truth was the video game 'pokemon' was released out from Nintendo before started Anime 'Pokemon' on television. When the video game realesed into the world, pikachu was not really famous as far as I know. However, Anime made pikachu be more popular sharply. You know, I understood why pikachu got to be popular, like, apparently, he has a lot of charm points something like, a cute voice, a shrot height and so on. By the way, have you ever seen the first pickchu when Anime'pokemon' started out to be on television. He used to be fatter than now, actually. But I like fat pikachu better. It was so adorable.

5 cze 2017 12:52

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JUST A DIARY ON JUN.5th

I would like someone to correct my diary entry. Could you do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.5th

There are a bunch of adorable characters in Japan. I would will pick up some adorable characters I think so can think of here, Pikachu, Doraemon, Mario or whatever and etc. This time, I would say what do I feel about Pikachu as I like it the best of them. As You know that Pikachu is a character in Anime 'Pokemon', I guess Anime 'pokemon' made it be Anime more popular and famous, you know the truth was when the video game 'pokemon' was released out from by Nintendo before started Anime 'Pokemon' on television. When the video game realesed into the world, pikachu was not really famous as far as I know. However, Anime made pikachu be more popular sharply. You know, I understood understand why pikachu got to could be popular, like, apparently, he has a lot of charm points something like, a cute voice, a short a height and so on. By the way, have you ever seen the first pickchu when Anime'pokemon' started out to be on television. He used to be fatter than now, actually. But I like fat pikachu better. It was so adorable.

PS. That's the best I could do, hope you get better correction later on. Just give you an advice, I'm not anime lover myself so I don't know if Pikachu is male or female but if you talk about character you could put He/Her instead of "It"

5 czerwca 2017

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUN.5th (Writing about Pikachu) There are a bunch of adorable characters in Japan. I will pick up some adorable characters I can think of here, Pikachu, Doraemon, Mario and etc. This time, I would say what do I feel about pikachu as I like it the best of them. As you know that Pikachu is a character in Anime 'Pokemon', I guess Anime 'Pokemon' made him more popular and famous, you know the truth was when the video game 'pokemon' was released out from by Nintendo before started Anime 'Pokemon' on television. When the video game released into the world, pikachu was not really famous as far as I know. However, Anime made pikachu be more popular sharply. You know, I understand why pikachu could be popular, like, apparently, he has a lot of charm points something like, a cute voice, a short height, and so on. By the way, have you ever seen the first pikachu when Anime 'Pokemon' started out to be on television. He used to be fatter than now, actually. But I like fat pikachu better. He was so adorable.

7 czerwca 2017

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